Tuesday, August 17, 2004

Fragmentos de um roteiro 4

(It probably won't make any sense if anybody attempts to read this, but fuck it. It makes sense to me. I'm just putting down some ideas, ok?)

ASTRONAUT (OFF CAM.)
...'I wish I could wake up and look at you - lying on the bed, next to me. '

He turn around in bed and faces THE GIRL looking at him and smiling. He speaks to her.

ASTRONAUT
'I don't feel homesick but I do miss you a lot'.

The girl keeps smiling. He breathes heavily. He reaches out to her and takes THE PICTURE OF HER LYING IN BED off the wall.

ASTRONAUT (OFF CAM.)
'If I close my eyes I can still see your face, and I'm not without you'.

He closes his eyes

WHITE FADE

EXT - CONEY ISLAND - DAY

We 're moving in the sand until we reach her feet walking. The astronaut is looking down. He looks up to her smiling. Wide shot, his all alone in the beach. He stops, lays down. Cameras upside down he sees her aproaching.

ASTRONAUT (OFF CAM)
'If I try hard and concentrate, I can see you sayin...'

HER
'I Missed you.'

He laughs.

ASTRONAUT (OFF)
I want to make a movie here one day.

We see a couple running in the beach (perhaps a scene copyed from jules et jim). We see the Astronaut with his hand trying to imitate a camera, running after an invisible act.

He laughs

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